Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

My brother and I were alone at home because my parents had gone for a meeting and they had left me in charge. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV. Suddenly the doorbell rang. My younger brother rushed to the door thinking that our parents had come home, he unlocked the door and opened it.

Outside stood a tall man wearing a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He said he was a salesman and asked politely if out mother or father was at home.

Without thinking, my brother said:” No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books which he was selling. I quickly explained that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parent’s permission.

Then, as I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother’s hands with some rope which he took out form his pocket. I tied up his hands but tied it in a special way so my brother could untie himself. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen.

Soon, the went upstairs to search the bedroom for valuables. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on the his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but the line was dead. The doors were all locked from the outside and I did not have the keys to unlock them. Luckily, the robber forgot to lock the kitchen window. My brother managed to get out of the house through the window and I told him to go to the police station nearby and call for help.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

2. 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語。

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Answer 1

【答案】After a while, my brother brought the police to our house. The police let us hid somewhere and they went upstairs to catch the robber who was still there searching for valuable things. A few minutes later, there was a big noise and then the rubber was brought downstairs. We were very happy. But we had to go the police station to make a report. There we were told that robber was a wanted criminal who the police have been trying to catch for a long time. The police thanked us for our excellent work.

By the time my parents had come home, they lectured us that, as children, we should see who it was outside out house before opening the door. And we shouldn’t open the door to strangers, especially those who looked highly suspicious. I remembered and I thought I learnt an important lesson on safety and responsibility.

【解析】

試題分析：閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語。3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】續(xù)寫部分緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，高級(jí)句式、詞匯運(yùn)用恰如其分。the robber who was still there searching for valuable things.句中使用定語從句；A few minutes later, there was a big noise and then the rubber was brought downstairs.被動(dòng)語態(tài)在句中運(yùn)用；There we were told that robber was a wanted criminal who the police have been trying to catch for a long time.被動(dòng)語態(tài)、賓語從句和定語從句神奇結(jié)合；we should see who it was outside out house before opening the door.連詞加現(xiàn)在分詞做時(shí)間狀語。