【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1、答案請寫在答題卷上;

2、只允許修改 10 處,多者(從第 11 處起)不計分;

3、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

4、答題符號、格式要規(guī)范:

One June, I helped my grandma water the freshly planted flowers around the house. She was so gentle with them no wonder they grew so fast. When all the work were finished, I ran to get my bike to ride for a while. As I was getting on it, however, I noticed there was anything new. I got off and kneel down on the walkway leading to our house. I found a single wild flower coming out of a crack by the walkway, without the water, soil or love.

The surprised new life hit me a lot. Sometimes in my own life, I felt my grow looked like grandma’s flowers, that were loved and cared for. At other times I felt as if I were that wild flower, growing by the walkway quiet and having to grow through the solid concrete. I realized that it doesn’t matter where you grow and it just matters that you grow.

【答案】1. no前加that

2. werewas

3. anything→something

4. kneel→knelt/kneeled

5. 去掉the

6. surprised→surprising

7. grow→growth

8. that→which

9. quiet→quietly

10. and→but

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。作者通過對奶奶細心養(yǎng)的花和頑強生長的野花的對比,聯(lián)系到自己的生長,意識到重要的不是生長在哪里而是你的成長。

1. 考查連詞。句意:她對它們?nèi)绱藴厝,難怪他們長得這么快。so...that...如此……以至于……是固定句型,故no前加that

2. 考查主謂一致。句意:當(dāng)所有的工作都完成,我跑去騎了一會兒自行車。Work“工作”是不可數(shù)名詞,謂語動詞用單數(shù),故將were改為was。

3. 考查代詞。anything主要用于否定句和疑問句,something主要用于肯定句中,本句表示有一些新的東西,故將anything改為something。

4. 考查動詞時態(tài)。and連接并列謂語,根據(jù)語境用一般過去時,故將kneel改為knelt/kneeled。

5. 考查冠詞。句意:我發(fā)現(xiàn)一朵野花從人行道上的裂縫里出來,沒有水、土壤或愛。此處water表示泛指,故去掉waterthe。

6. 考查ing形式形容詞。修飾物用ing形容詞修飾,表示事物的特征;ed形式形容詞修飾人,表示人的感受,此處表示“這個令人吃驚的新生命”。故將surprised改為surprising

7. 考查名詞。形容詞性物主代詞修飾名詞,grow是動詞,名詞形式是growth,故將grow改為growth

8. 考查定語從句的關(guān)系詞。此處引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,修飾先行詞flowers,從句中作主語,引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句用關(guān)系代詞whichthat不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,故將that改為which。

9. 考查副詞。修飾動詞growing用副詞作狀語,故將quiet改為quietly。

10. 考查連詞。句意:我意識到你在哪里成長并不重要,重要的是你在成長。前后文是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故將and改為but。

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