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【題目】假設你是中華中學學生姚平，最近參加了一項研究性學習調研，課題為＂父母是否以子女為榮＂。通過調研你校學生及其父母，結果發(fā)現雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數據如圖所示）。根據圖表寫一份報告，在報告中，你必須：
①描述調研數據；
② 分析可能導致這一結果的原因。

Answer 1

【答案】參考例文：
Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．
There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference． First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence． Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud． This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up．
【解析】本文屬于圖表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份寫一則報告，通報“父母是否以子女為榮”的調研報告的內容。文章使用第三人稱和一般現在時為主的時態(tài)。要點：1.最近參加了一項研究性學習調研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調研你校學生及其父母，結果發(fā)現雙方對此問題的看法有差異。2.百分之80的父母親以孩子為榮；百分之60的孩子認為父母以我為榮。3.分析原因：父母親把全部的精力都放在孩子身上，孩子的成功也證明自己的教育方法是正確的；而現在的孩子因為年齡較小，并沒有很強的責任感,他們并沒有感受到自己承擔的義務和責任。建議在寫作的時候添加適當的諺語，如Everycoin has two sides.提升文采，以增加獲得高分的可能性；穿插使用多種句式，讓文章富有變化.同時要使用兩到三個復合句，并適當使用串聯詞。