Question

20．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華．你的美國朋友Jim要來北京旅游，他寫信尋求你對旅游地的建議，請你給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．景點名稱；
2．參觀內(nèi)容；
3．推薦理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
Glad to hear that you are coming．As for the scenery spot，Ido think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．As is known，the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world．（推薦的旅游地）Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall，you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall，very impressive．Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps，which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming．However，along the way，you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries，enormous monuments full of culture，and splendid beacon towers，which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement．Averagely，it will take you two hours to get to the top，where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement．（參觀內(nèi)容）As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．The Great Wall is the treasure of our country，and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing．It is，of course，a must-see for you!You can't miss it!Just come and enjoy yourself!Looking forward to your arrival!（推薦理由）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是介紹長城的書信，根據(jù)要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：1．景點名稱；2．參觀內(nèi)容；3．推薦理由．
高分句型：
1 As for the scenery spot，I do think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．句子里As for 表示"關(guān)于，至于"； do是對謂語動詞 think 強(qiáng)調(diào)的助動詞；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞the Badaling Great Wall．
至于景點，我認(rèn)為八達(dá)嶺長城是一個完美的選擇，它在延慶．
2．As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．句子里．As 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句，譯為"正如"；定語從句who does not reach the Great Wall 修飾先行詞he，he是主句的主語．
中國有句古話，不到長城非好漢．

解答 Dear Jim，
Glad to hear that you are coming．As for the scenery spot，I do think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice，which is in Yanqing District in Beijing．【高分句型一】As is known，the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world．（推薦的旅游地）Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall，you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall，very impressive．Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps，which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming．However，along the way，you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries，enormous monuments full of culture，and splendid beacon towers，which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement．Averagely，it will take you two hours to get to the top，where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement．（參觀內(nèi)容）As is said in China，he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man．【高分句型二】The Great Wall is the treasure of our country，and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing．It is，of course，a must-see for you!You can't miss it!Just come and enjoy yourself!Looking forward to your arrival!（推薦理由）
Yours，
Li Hua

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