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假設(shè)你是高中生李越，發(fā)現(xiàn)校園中存在的高中生普遍不愿意參加體育活動(dòng)（physical exercise）的現(xiàn)象。他們認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)緊張，進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)會(huì)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，影響學(xué)習(xí)。但是，作為校學(xué)生會(huì)的體育部長(zhǎng)，你對(duì)此有不同的想法。決定在校英語報(bào)上，就此話題，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文，向大家宣傳體育鍛煉的好處。短文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 指出他們觀點(diǎn)的不對(duì)之處；

2. 告知體育鍛煉的好處；

3. 結(jié)合自身經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提出建議。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE

Physical exercise is a necessary part of school life. However, still some students do not like to attend sports activities. They think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them.

  We can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help us build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood. Besides, by attending physical activities, we can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help us improve our social skills.

 As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every student, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities.

【解析】

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。