Question

14．假如你是李華．現(xiàn)在你寫一封信告訴你的外國朋友Peter如何保持健康．要點如下．注意：100詞左右，所給的句子不計入總詞數(shù)
1、健康對我們?nèi)魏稳藖碚f都是最為重要的． 2、注意你的飲食．均衡飲食．
3、鍛煉是必要的． 4、要養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣．不抽煙，多休息．
Dear Peter，
    I am writing to you to tell you something about health．
        ．
 Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一封信告訴你的外國朋友Peter如何保持健康，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從健康對我們?nèi)魏稳藖碚f都是最為重要的．注意你的飲食．均衡飲食．鍛煉是必要的．要養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣．不抽煙，多休息幾個方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：In order to 以便，為了，pay attention to 注意，are rich in富含，F(xiàn)irstly首先，Secondly其次，F(xiàn)inally最后
What's more而且，stay away from遠離
In order to stay healthy，we need some common knowledge．（高分句型一）
We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and low in fat．（高分句型二）
People who do running every day usually have st ronger hearts than those who don't．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
    I am writing to you to tell you something about health．
    Health is the most important for us．In order to stay healthy，we need some common knowledge．（高分句型一）
    Firstly，pay attention to the diet．We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables，because they are rich in fiber and low in fat．（高分句型二）Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat，such as butter．Don't drink too much coffee，either．  Secondly，exercise is necessary．Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat．People who do running every day usually have st ronger hearts than those who don't．（高分句型三）  Finally，form good living habits．We should sleep for about 8 hours at night，and never work too hard．What's more，stay away from cigarettes．
                                                                                                                                    yours，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．