Question

目前，許多學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對(duì)此看法不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇120左右詞的短文，客觀地介紹討論情況，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為
學(xué)校限制我們的自由；學(xué)生和社會(huì)接觸少；學(xué)生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的 發(fā)展�！�…	學(xué)校是學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)的地方：學(xué)生應(yīng)該安心 在學(xué)校里學(xué)習(xí)；學(xué)生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會(huì)……
你的看法：

Answer 1

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies.
As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. (I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.)

解析這是一篇表達(dá)正反觀點(diǎn)的作文，在寫作時(shí)，一定要注意有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為的觀點(diǎn)可以再次拓展，但在表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，不要重復(fù)使用上面用過(guò)的句子。自己的觀點(diǎn)可以是同意也可以是不同意，然后說(shuō)出自己的理由，以及解決的辦法。