Question

3．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月六日到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文．來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房．請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知他你愿意提供哪些幫助．
面積：40m2，月租：1000元

 注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；2．參考詞匯：房租-rent（n．）．
Dear Bob，
                                                               
Looking forward to your early coming．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇文章要求為遠(yuǎn)道而來的筆友介紹住房情況．可以看到提示有兩張圖，分別畫了公交車路線和房屋平面圖．可知考生要介紹去往住房的路線以及住房的結(jié)構(gòu)布局．另外還要說明可以提供的幫助．所以作文可分這三點來寫．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
be located on，坐落于，have easy access to，便于去，hesitate to do sth．猶豫做某事

高分句子：
1．Having learned that you are coming on September 6 and need a flat，I have found a suitable one for you．前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語，豐富句子結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．you will have easy access to Jianxin Chinese School，where you are to take courses．本句中含where引導(dǎo)的有非限制性定語從句，做地點狀語．

解答 Dear Bob，
    Having learned that you are coming on September 6 and need a flat，I have found a suitable one for you．（高分句型）
    The flat with a size of 40 square meters is located on Fangcao Street and you will have easy access to Jianxin Chinese School，where you are to take courses．（高分句型）Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school．（說明路線）Besides，the flat is well furnished with a separate bathroom and a kitchen attached where hot water is available in 24 hours and free internet access is offered．Furthermore，the rent is only 1000 yuan per month．（介紹住房）
    If you don't like it，feel free to let me know and I will find another one for you．What's more，if you have any confusion about life in China，don't hesitate to contact me．（提供幫助）
    Looking forward to your early coming．
Yours
Li Hua

點評 考生在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體．