Question

4．假如你是李華，高中畢業(yè)后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學（University of Virginia ）計算機專業(yè)深造．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一封入學申請．
1．個人情況；
2．學習情及特長；
3．申請入學的理由；
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USAand enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
Sinceely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，高中畢業(yè)后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學（University of Virginia ）計算機專業(yè)深造．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫一封入學申請，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：個人情況；學習情及特長；申請入學的理由；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：graduate from 從…畢業(yè)；an all-round student 全面發(fā)展的學生；in particular尤其，特別；all around the world世界范圍內(nèi)
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
  I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
        First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
        I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
                                                                                                Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．