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13．假定你是李華，你所在的城市為了改善環(huán)境，最近推出了"摩拜單車"（mobike）-公共自行車租借活動．租用的人很多，但出現(xiàn)了亂停亂放，占用機動車道和故意破壞等現(xiàn)象．請你用英語給ChinaDaily的編輯寫一封信，反映這一社會問題，并針對以上現(xiàn)象提出改進措施．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor，
I am glad to find more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．
However，problems also arise．The bicycles are left almost everywhere at will in the street．Also，many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．Worse still，damages have been found on some new bicycles．My suggestions on how to improve the situation are as follows．
First of all，Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the street，In this way，fewer people will leave the bicycle as they please．Secondly，more roads for bicycles need to be provided．
I hope this bicycle renting project will help build better traffic and improve the air quality in the city．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高級句型一）many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．
該句式使用causing現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語表示結(jié)果；句意為很多人在機動車道騎車，結(jié)果造成很多交通事故；
（高分句型二Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the street．
該句使用了被動句式，強調(diào)停車場要被建立；
高級詞匯：at will 隨意；decide on 決定；
過渡詞使用：Also也；First of all首先；In this way用這種方式；Secondly第二；Worse still更糟糕的是；

解答 Dear editor，
       I am glad to find more and more public bicycles are provided in the street for people to rent．（提出問題）However，problems also arise．The bicycles are left almost everywhere at will in the street．Also，（高級句型一）many people ride the bicycles on the driveway，causing a lot of traffic accidents．Worse still，
damages have been found on some new bicycles．My suggestions on how to improve the situation are as
follows．
     First of all，（高分句型二）Parking lot should be designed and decided on certain specific areas in the
street，（我的建議）In this way，fewer people will leave the bicycle as they please．Secondly，more roads for bicycles need to be provided．
      I hope this bicycle renting project will help build better traffic and improve the air quality in the city．
Yours
Li Hua．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型