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Dear Mrs Winthrop,

      So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think Fd like to email you and let you know what things are going.

I'm glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well,I had better to stop now. Fm going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for Fve got some preparations to make. Keep in touch.

Best,

Carol

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Dear Mrs Winthrop,

     So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I'd like to email you and let you know what/how things are how going.

   I'm glad to say that anything /everything has everything worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find/found me a comfortable found one on/with second floor. There are two girls the from my course here and I plan to make friend/friends end with them so we can help each other on /with friends the course work. Everyone else seems with very nice and warmly/warm l here. Well,I had better to warm stop now. Tm going to attend mine /my first  my lesson this afternoon, for/so I've got some so pieparaX\otvs to make. Keep in touch.

                                Best,

                                Carol