Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序給學(xué)校英文報投稿，記述你所居住的小區(qū)在你的建議下建立愛心驛站的過程。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60;

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞： 物業(yè) the management department

Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community.

One day on my way home, I noticed several deliverymen crowding at the entrance to our community. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea. I decided to do something for them. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.

The next day, a poster was put up on the bulletin board in our community to call on people to donate. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money. Some food and snacks were prepared soon.

On Friday afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. To my delight, a rest station had been set up. Several deliverymen and one cleaner were having a rest at the station. Some were drinking water, while others were having fruits. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement. What a meaningful experience! A small act of kindness can make a big difference.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。記述你所居住的小區(qū)在你的建議下建立愛心驛站的過程。

第一步：審題

體裁：記敘文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1.記述你幫忙建立愛心驛站的過程。

2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

came up with; set up; think highly of; contribute; a sense of achievement

第三步：連詞成句

1. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.

2. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen.

3. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.

4. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money.

5. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1. 表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：活動的原因；活動的內(nèi)容；活動的意義

2. 表示并列補充關(guān)系：while; after; and; suddenly

第五步：潤色修改