Question

日常生活中，越來越多的人選擇用手機(jī)短信的方式送祝福。據(jù)報道，有些人在元旦一天之內(nèi)就收發(fā)了數(shù)百條新年祝福短信。請你以“More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages”為題目，按以下要點用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。

1、描述以上有關(guān)手機(jī)短信互送祝福的情況；

2、分析原因（如手機(jī)的普遍使用、方便快捷、費用紙……）

3、簡短評論。

注意：短文的標(biāo)題已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）

More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

More people are sending holiday greetings by text messages

An increasing number of people are sending holiday greetings by text messages. Some people are even reported to have sent and received hundreds of such messages on New Year’s Day.

With the wide use of mobile phones, text messages have become an essential way of communication. With a mobile phone you can greet others whenever and wherever you like. Moreover, the cost of sending a message is so low that nearly everyone can afford it. Modern technology even makes it possible for a user to send greetings in a more vivid way.

However, we can’t be blind to the disadvantages it brings to us. Sometimes, a single message will be copied

many times and sent to different people, which is not a good way to show your care and true feelings. Anyway, we

shouldn’t neglect the true meaning of festivals and greetings

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】

范文運用一些常見的短語be even reported to have done 據(jù)報道某人已經(jīng)，，；a way of ..的方式；Moreover, the cost of sending a message is so low that nearly everyone can afford it.這個句子中運用了so …that如此以致于；Modern technology even makes it possible for a user to send greetings in a more vivid way.這個句子中運用到make it adj to do sth 這個句型，it做形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的不定式；Sometimes, a single message will be copied many times and sent to different people, which is not a good way to show your care and true feelings.這個句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

考點： 提綱類作文