Question

17．近來(lái)，中國(guó)游客在海外的不文明行為備受關(guān)注．假設(shè)你是李華，一名國(guó)際旅行社的導(dǎo)游，就此寫(xiě)一篇短文在一份英文報(bào)紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．列舉不文明行為    2．指出其影響     3．提出建議
注意：
1.100詞左右    2．至少寫(xiě)出兩條建議    3．首句已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)
參考詞匯：亂寫(xiě)亂畫(huà) scribble  吐痰 spit  刻字 carve characters
As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad------．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近近來(lái)，中國(guó)游客在海外的不文明行為備受關(guān)注．假設(shè)你是李華，一名國(guó)際旅行社的導(dǎo)游，就此寫(xiě)一篇短文在一份英文報(bào)紙上發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：列舉不文明行為；指出其影響；提出建議2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：tourist attractions旅游景點(diǎn)； in public places在公共場(chǎng)所；besides另外；
They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit everywhere，and even cross the road when the traffic lights are red．（高分句型一） 
 I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country．（高分句型二）

解答 As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many chinese tourists behave badly abroad．They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit everywhere，and even cross the road when the traffic lights are red．（高分句型一）Such bad behavior overseas has caused damage to our country's reputation．
      Measures should be taken to stop this．First，before going abroad，tourists should be trained to obey local social and public order，and respect religions and customs．Besides，kindergartens and schools should do more to teach kids to be responsible citizens．At last，laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places．
      I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country．（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．