Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友王林生病了�，F(xiàn)在請你給他寫一封信，要點(diǎn)包括：

1．聽到好友生病時(shí)的心情；

2．勸他放棄熬夜的習(xí)慣；

3．建議他身體康復(fù)后要保證睡眠，經(jīng)常鍛煉，合理飲食。

注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右：

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Wang Lin,

I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been ill for a few days and

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon. You often stay up late at night, which is really a bad habit. Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit.

To keep healthy, you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise. Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit. In addition, you should eat a balanced diet, which is helpful to your health.

Hope to see you well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為應(yīng)用文作文，要求給生病的好友王林寫封信。內(nèi)容要求1．聽到好友生病時(shí)的心情；

2．勸他放棄熬夜的習(xí)慣；3．建議他身體康復(fù)后要保證睡眠，經(jīng)常鍛煉，合理飲食。故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：賓語從句that you have been ill for a few days。that you will get well soon. 和that you can give up the bad habit.定語從句which is really a bad habit.和which is helpful to your health.動(dòng)詞-ing形式Staying up和Taking proper exercise做主語。do great harm to，a balanced diet等詞語。