Question

【題目】書面表達

要成為一名成功的英語學(xué)習者，語言訓(xùn)練是非常重要的。為此英語老師要求同學(xué)以“Practice makes perfect”為話題，用英語寫一篇短文，談一談英語學(xué)習中語言訓(xùn)練的重要性，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下兩個方面:

1、你對此話題的理解；

2、與之相關(guān)的事例。

注意:

1、字數(shù):100左右；

2、第一句話已經(jīng)給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。

The old saying that practice makes perfect means _________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The saying that practice makes perfect means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it,and it is the same with English learning.

For example, when we learn English, we have to learn grammar, words, expressions and so on. The best way to improve the language skills is to practice,practice,practice. If we only learn the grammar rules by heart and don＇t do enough exercises, it is certain that we can＇t use the language freely. This applies equally to becoming a good musician or painter.

It is evident that practice is important for everybody. If you want to improve your English, either speaking or writing, remember that practice makes perfect.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中指給出了寫作的要求，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，內(nèi)容上注意從四個方面進行描述，不能遺漏要點；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：it is the same with...同樣，applies to適用，means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing兩句賓語從句，The best way to improve the language skills is to practice,practice,practice.使用了重復(fù)這一修辭手法，it is certain that we can＇t use the language freely使用了形式主語。