假定你是李華,上網(wǎng)時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)有外籍教師在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ),因此發(fā)帖向在線外籍教師Peter尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)包括:

1.自我介紹(姓名、身份及年級(jí));

2.英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況、困難及感受:

3.請(qǐng)求給予幫助。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Dear Peter,

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Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, a senior student from China. I’m very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral English online along with your contact information. So I can’t wait to post this message to you.

I’ve learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousand English words and some basic grammar. I can do some reading and writing in English now. But I still have difficulty in listening and speaking. I always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.

That’s why I am writing to you. It would be nice if you could do me a favour. I’m looking forward to chatting with you often.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:本文是一篇書信類作文,要求根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容寫一則書信。根據(jù)提示的信息可知,文章應(yīng)按照書信的格式寫,內(nèi)容包括:自我介紹(姓名、身份及年級(jí)),英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況、困難及感受,以及向他請(qǐng)求幫助等三個(gè)方面。本文是一則書信,所以用第一人稱,以現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮想象,適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點(diǎn),使文章內(nèi)容豐滿,并達(dá)到要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。此外為了提高文章檔次,還要注意使用多種句式和高級(jí)詞匯,并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章用了書信應(yīng)該用的格式,恰到好處的運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),時(shí)間點(diǎn)都用的非常好。雖然沒(méi)有用過(guò)多華麗的詞語(yǔ),但是寫的明了,充分描述了自己的困難以及誠(chéng)懇地請(qǐng)求別人的幫助。

考點(diǎn):考查書信類作文

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