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【題目】據(jù)報道，近日北京市空氣質量達到重度污染程度，霧霾(haze)再次籠罩首都。霧霾天氣極大地影響了人們的健康和生活。請仔細觀察這兩幅漫畫，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你對此問題的看法和建議。

你的作文應包括以下內容：

1．簡要描述兩幅圖的內容；

2．概述霧霾對生活造成的影響；

3．簡述你的建議和措施。

注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右；

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】As can be seen in the first cartoon，many cars are running on the road，while the black smoke is rising from the factories.The second cartoon implies that due to the heavy air pollution，people’s life is negatively affected.

It is reported that Beijing was attacked by haze again recently，which has raised great concern throughout the country.Haze does great harm to our daily life.On the one hand，people’s health is greatly threatened.It is obvious that the number of people who have problems with their noses and lungs is growing.On the other hand，more traffic jams and accidents arise from the poor visibility on the road.

As far as I’m concerned，the recurrence of smog sounds the alarm about environmental protection.And it is not just the government’s affair.Everyone can be involved in a green lifestyle.For instance，we can choose the public transportation for work or school.And if possible，plant trees every year.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求考生觀察漫畫寫出對霧霾問題的看法和建議。文章內容要點已經給出。考生在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：

1.本題考察觀察漫畫寫作，因此要注意提取準確、切題的信息。通篇以一般將來時與現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。

2.內容要齊全。本題要求包含兩幅圖的內容、霧霾對生活造成的影響、建議和措施，考生要注意切忌遺漏要點。寫作時不要對要點進行簡單的羅列，可以使用適當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程，語言要簡潔。

3.作文根據(jù)提示內容可分為三段。第一段描述漫畫的具體內容，語言要簡潔精煉，涵蓋重點，傳達出作文的主題。第二段概述霧霾對生活造成的影響，可從人體健康、交通等方面闡述。第三段簡述應對霧霾天氣的建議和措施。

【范文亮點】

1.文章以“As can be seen in the first cartoon”開頭，開門見山，直接描寫漫畫內容，引出本文的主題。

2.文章采用了 “due to由于”、“It is reported that據(jù)報道”、“do harm to對…造成傷害”、“On the one hand一方面”、“On the other hand另一方面”、“As far as I’m concerned就我而言”、“For instance例如”等高分詞組。

3. It is reported that Beijing was attacked by haze again recently，which has raised great concern throughout the country. which引導的非限制性定語從句.