【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分.

Dear fellow students,

There is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students crowded in the school store to buy snacks and some students even eat snacks in class.

Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also waste of money. In addition to, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too many fat and sugar. Eating snacks improper may lead to fatness and illness. What’s more, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, that pollutes our campus.

Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we pay attention to this phenomenon. Our high school students, should develop good eating habits. Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balance diet is essential for us.

【答案】

【1】crowded →crowd

【2】are→is

【3】waste 前加a

【4】in addition to 的 to 去掉

【5】many →much

【6】improper→improperly

【7】that→which

【8】we 后加should 或paid

【9】our→we

【10】balance→balanced

【解析】：

試題分析：本文是一篇小作文，作者指出了學(xué)校不文明的現(xiàn)象：許多學(xué)生聚集到學(xué)校小店里買零食，有人甚至在課堂上吃零食，吃完零食又把包裝袋到處扔。吃零食是個(gè)壞習(xí)慣，不僅浪費(fèi)錢又對(duì)健康不利。作者還提倡養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習(xí)慣。

【1】crowded →crowd考察動(dòng)詞。crowded為形容詞，意思是擁擠的，塞滿的，而此處應(yīng)填動(dòng)詞crowd，意思是聚集，句意：在我們學(xué)校有一個(gè)很嚴(yán)重的現(xiàn)象就是很多學(xué)生聚集到學(xué)校商店里買零食，一些學(xué)生甚至在課堂上吃零食。故把crowded 改成crowd。

【2】are→is考察be動(dòng)詞。這句話主語(yǔ)是 Eating snacks吃零食，屬于單數(shù)，所以be動(dòng)詞要用is，句意：吃零食是個(gè)壞習(xí)慣也浪費(fèi)錢。故把are改成is。

【3】waste 前加a考察冠詞。waste是名詞，意思是浪費(fèi)，廢物，要用冠詞a來(lái)修飾，a waste of money意思是浪費(fèi)錢。故在waste 前加a。

【4】去掉 addition to 的 to考察介詞。in addition to意思是除……之外（還），后跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞。in addition作為連詞，意思是另外。句意：另外，大多數(shù)零食是不健康食物。故把in addition to 的 to 去掉。

【5】many →much考察副詞。fat作名詞的時(shí)候是不可數(shù)名詞，意思是脂肪，所以用much修飾。句意：因?yàn)樗鼈儼嗟闹竞吞穷�。故�?/span>many 改成much。

【6】improper→improperly考察副詞。improper是形容詞，意思是不正確的，此處應(yīng)用副詞來(lái)修飾動(dòng)名eating，eating snacks improperly意思是不正確地吃零食。故把improper改成improperly。

【7】that→which考察關(guān)系代詞。此處是要用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，只能用which引導(dǎo)。句意：而且，一些學(xué)生到處扔包裝紙，污染了校園。故把that改成which。

78.【8】we 后加should 或把pay→paid考察固定搭配。it’s high time that sb. did(should do) sth.固定句型，意思是是做……的時(shí)候了。句意：親愛的同學(xué)們，是們?cè)撟⒁膺@一現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候了。故在we 后加should/pay改成paid。

【9】our→we考察人稱代詞。we high school students指我們高中生，而our high school students指我們的高中生，作者此處表達(dá)的是我們作為高中生的意思。故把our改成we。

【10】balance→balanced考察形容詞。balance為動(dòng)詞，意思是平衡，balanced為形容詞，意思是平衡的，此處要用形容詞balanced修飾名詞diet，意思是平衡的飲食習(xí)慣。故把balance改成balanced。

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