分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,在"五一勞動節(jié)"期間,你參加了美心旅行社舉辦的"美麗西藏行""打包旅行"活動,活動之后,你對這次活動非常不滿,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:▲.行途中的食物很差;▲工作人員的服務態(tài)度不好;▲.住宿條件差,不安全;▲.購物的時間和場所安排的較多.請就此事給美心旅行社的經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫.3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:complain about抱怨,投訴;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;Besides另外;Lastly,最后;be tired of厭倦,厭煩;take…seriously 認真對待;
I'm writing to complain about the package tour--A beautiful travel to Tibet to Yunnan organized by your travel agency-Pleasant Travel Agency on May Day.(高分句型一)
Lastly,we were forced to stay in so many shops for so long to buy unnecessary goods.(高分句型二)
I will appreciate it if you can take our complaints seriously and make every effort to improve your service in the future.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua.I am a passenger of your travel agency.I'm writing to complain about the package tour--A beautiful travel to Tibet to Yunnan organized by your travel agency-Pleasant Travel Agency on May Day.(高分句型一)
Firstly,the food on the trip was terrible and we even couldn't have enough to eat.Secondly,I think that the guide from your agency was unfriendly and impolite to us.Besides,o our disappointment,we were arranged to stay in a poorly equipped hotel with no hot water supply.Lastly,we were forced to stay in so many shops for so long to buy unnecessary goods.(高分句型二)We were really tired of it.
I will appreciate it if you can take our complaints seriously and make every effort to improve your service in the future.(高分句型三)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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