Question

11．假如你是李華，一名即將進入高三的學生．2017年高考在即，面對壓力，想和父母說說心里話，請你用英文在你的博客上以書信的形式表達出來．內容要點如下：

知心話	對父母的感謝	感謝他們傾注關愛，關心鼓勵
	對父母的希望	1．和他們多交流，使自己保持良好狀態(tài)
		2．創(chuàng)造條件，給自己提供實時幫助
學習打算	考生自擬（至少寫兩點）

注意：
1．短文須包括以上所有內容要點．
2．詞數100左右；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Mom and Dad，
The annual college entrance examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
          ．
Yours ever
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me．
此句使用it is+名詞 that引導的主語從句，it是形式主語，that是真正的主語．
（高分句型二）Besides，I also hope that you can create necessary conditions，thus providing me with timely help．
該句型使用providing現在分詞做狀語．
高級詞匯：encouragement鼓勵；spare勻出；be determined to 決定做某事；turn to 向某人求救；
To begin with首先；Meanwhile與此同時；Besides除此之外；What's more而且，表遞進；

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
   The annual college entrance examination is around the corner．On this special occasion，how I wish I could  have a heart-to-heart talk with you．
  （表達對父母的感謝） To begin with，I am grateful to all the love，care and encouragement you have given me all these years．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，it is my sincere hope that you can spare more time to communicate with me．In this way，I can always be in a good state in the coming year．（高分句型二）Besides，I also hope that you can create necessary conditions，thus providing me with timely help．（對父母的期望）
   （自己的打算）For my part，I am determined to concentrate more time and energy on my study and，if any problem arises，turn to my teachers immediately．What's more，I will pay special attention to maths where I used to score low．After all，a balanced development is essential in the college entrance examination．
                                                                                                                       
                                                         Yours ever
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．