Question

14．假定你是高中生李華，上周日參加了本班組織的一次志愿者活動--去孤兒院獻(xiàn)愛心．請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一份關(guān)于此次活動的報(bào)告．
內(nèi)容提示：
1．活動（贈送學(xué)習(xí)用品、教唱兒歌、拍照留念等）；
2．你的感想；
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
參考詞匯：孤兒orphan；     孤兒院：orphanage．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As soon as we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome
高分句型二：
We gave the children gifts such as books and pencil boxes，which we had prepared in advance
句型一 As soon as we arrived，該句是一個由 as soon as 引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，as soon as 意為：一…就…
句型二 which we had prepared in advance 該句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在句子中充當(dāng)賓語，替代前面的先行詞books and pencil boxes
此外，該文章還有以下重要短語：have a visit to       make the effort to do sth

解答 Last Sunday，our class organized a meaningful voluntary activity----we had a visit to an orphanage and showed our love for orphans there．
As soon as we arrived，they gave us a warm welcome．（高分句型一）We gave the children gifts such as books and pencil boxes，which we had prepared in advance．（高分句型二）Then we patiently taught them to sing some children's songs．Before leaving，we took pictures with them to mark the activity．When it was time for us to leave，the children waved their hands and said they were grateful for our kindness．（活動簡介）
We made the effort to bring sunshine to the children's life and the children's smiles confirmed that it was worthwhile to do such a job．（提出感謝）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇活動報(bào)告，這類文體的作文，一般可以寫成記敘文或說明文．本文根據(jù)要求，可以寫成一篇記敘文的短文．要求中的"上周日"暗示此篇文章中動詞的時態(tài)應(yīng)該是以過去時為主．報(bào)告類的文章，敘述的語言應(yīng)該力求簡潔，重在陳述過程，不要加對話．如果要求部分需要加個人評論，個人感言，可以加評述性語言，本文需要利用最后一段談個人感想．根據(jù)要求部分的內(nèi)容，本文應(yīng)該采用第一人稱形式寫作．