Question

最近，你班就“學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該對(duì)老師進(jìn)行民主測(cè)評(píng)”召開(kāi)了一次主題班會(huì)。討論情
況如下：

贊成：65%	反對(duì)：35%
可以促使老師更加了解自己的優(yōu)劣勢(shì)，更友善地對(duì)待學(xué)生，提高教學(xué)效率。	學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)不客觀，嚴(yán)格的老師常會(huì)得低分，老師知道后，情緒會(huì)受到影響，從而縱容學(xué)生，不利于學(xué)生的成長(zhǎng)。
你的觀點(diǎn)……

要求：根據(jù)表中內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Recently a heated discussion about whether the school launch surveys on teachers among students was held in our class, about which there are different opinions.
65% of the students consider it meaningful. They hold the view that teachers will be more responsible afterwards and employ new methods to teach more efficiently. What’s more, teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship.
However, others don’t think so. They say that some students tend to judge a teacher unfairly who is strict with them. Consequently, how can teachers keep their enthusiasm in their work? It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run.
Personally, such investigations can only be carried out when the school has done enough to make sure students assess their teachers objectively.

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)的是一篇以“學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該對(duì)老師進(jìn)行民主測(cè)評(píng)”的主題班會(huì)，分別闡述支持和反對(duì)的理由以及作者的想法。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如about which there are different opinions.這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句（介詞 + which）；teachers will treat students more kindly so that both sides will be in a more harmonious relationship. （so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）；It’s likely that they will spoil the students, which may influence their growth in the long run，既有固定句型：it islikely that…,又有定語(yǔ)從句。并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：What’s more，However，Consequently Personally，等。