Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以“The Ways to Keep Healthy” 為題，寫一篇短文。

提示：

1. 人人都想保持健康。

2．飲食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因?yàn)樗鼈兏缓�纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因?yàn)樗鼈兒�糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速變胖�?/span>

3．有良好的生活習(xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過度勞累，不抽煙等等。

要求：

1. 短文須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使短文連貫。

2．詞數(shù)約100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】The Ways to Keep Healthy

Everyone hopes to be in good health. But how? Here are some ways to keep healthy.

First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. Don’t eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, coffee and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.

Second, good living habits are very important. You should do regular exercise to build up your body. Besides, enough rest is necessary for your health. You need 8 hours’ sleep a night and don’t work too hard. Smoking is a bad habit, so never smoke.

In a word, healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy.

【解析】本文是提綱類作文，首先確定時(shí)態(tài)，需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，文章可以分為四段，第一段說明人人都想保持健康；第二段介紹怎樣來保持飲食健康；第三段提出想要保持健康，需要有良好的生活習(xí)慣。最后一個(gè)自然段進(jìn)行總結(jié)。寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文語言簡練，層次分明，布局合理，運(yùn)用高級句子。First, you need a healthy diet. It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. 這里包含一個(gè)原因狀語從句。In a word這個(gè)短語用得非常好，意思是總而言之。