Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Steve對冰雪運動非常感興趣。請你給他寫一封信邀請他今年寒假來參加哈爾濱冰雪節(jié)（Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival）。內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信目的；

2.活動安排；

3.注意事項

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steve,

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival will be held in December in Harbin, lasting about a month. Knowing you are interested in snow sports, I feel it would be great if you can join us this winter vacation.

The following are some details about the activity. To begin with, we will watch amazing ice sculptures, which are certain to leave you a deep impression. Besides, we can participate in a lot of events such as snow football matches and skiing. In my opinion, if you try skiing, you should receive training to keep you much safer. Do remember to keep yourself warm with a thick down jacket and socks, as it is very cold here.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請自己的澳大利亞朋友Steve今年寒假來參加哈爾濱冰雪節(jié)。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.寫信目的；

2.活動安排；

3.注意事項。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival；last; be interested in; join; details; ice sculptures; leave sb a deep impression; participate in; snow football matches ; skiing; keep sb safe; down jacket; cold。

第三步：連詞成句

Harbin International Ice and Snow Festival will be held in December in Harbin, lasting about a month.

Knowing you are interested in snow sports, I feel it would be great if you can join us this winter vacation.

The following are some details about the activity.

We will watch amazing ice sculptures, which are certain to leave you a deep impression.

We can participate in a lot of events such as snow football matches and skiing.

In my opinion, if you try skiing, you should receive training to keep you much safer.

Do remember to keep yourself warm with a thick down jacket and socks, as it is very cold here.

Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改