Question

假如你是迎光中學(xué)的高一新生李新，學(xué)校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What I Want to Learn in Senior School?”的英語演講活動以規(guī)劃自己高中的學(xué)習(xí)、生活，請結(jié)合自身看法與以下要點準(zhǔn)備一份演講稿。

要點包括：

學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)方法、習(xí)慣（可舉例說明）……

學(xué)會與人相處：對人真誠、友善，幫助別人，與人相處融洽……

3. 培養(yǎng)良好的品質(zhì)：堅定、樂觀，挑戰(zhàn)困難，努力實現(xiàn)夢想……

寫作要求：

詞數(shù)120詞左右；

開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

樂觀 optimistic adj. optimistically adv. optimism n.

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning! I’m Li Xin. I feel it an honor to give a speech here about “What I Want to Learn in Senior School.”

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Thanks for listening.

 

Answer 1

What I Want to Learn in Senior School?

Ladies and gentlemen,

Good morning! I’m Li Xin. I feel it an honor to give a speech here about, “What I Want to Learn in Senior School.” Actually, what I want to learn most are as follows.

To begin with, I am supposed to have good learning ways and habits to make certain that I will learn well. Clearly, successful study is based on good ways and habits. Furthermore, a class is like a family where I should get along well with others. But how can I? As we know, only if we are sincere and kind to others, can we have good relationships with them. Finally, I will learn to develop good qualities like being determined, being optimistic and so on. Of course, don’t forget to set a dream and make all efforts to realize it. It is our determination that helps us to challenge difficulties and it is a dream that leads us forward.

I believe I will live my life to the fullest in senior school. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：

題目要求以“What I Want to Learn in Senior School?”為主題的演講稿，幫助高一新生規(guī)劃高中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，演講稿需要結(jié)合自己的看法。寫作要點包括：學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)（可舉例說明）；學(xué)會與人相處；培養(yǎng)良好的品質(zhì)三方面；寫作要求有：詞數(shù)在120詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；注意使用參考詞匯；注意時態(tài)的正確使用；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀。

亮點說明：

范文注意使用Actually, To begin with, Clearly, Finally, Furthermore, As we know等銜接前后句子和前后段落，使作文顯得緊湊、連貫； 范文使用了主語從句what I want to learn most；賓語從句that I will learn well；定語從句where I should get along well with others；倒裝only if we are sincere and kind to others；強調(diào)句It is our determination that helps us to challenge difficulties等語法知識，使作文表達更加生動、更有說服力；

范文使用了一些固定短語和固定搭配：be supposed to，be based on，make all efforts，to the fullest等，使作文的內(nèi)容得到充實。

考點：書信類作文