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【題目】近年來(lái)，一些西方節(jié)日（如圣誕節(jié)情人節(jié)等）在中國(guó)越來(lái)越流行。許多人對(duì)這些節(jié)日狂熱追捧，而對(duì)于一些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日（如春節(jié)、中秋節(jié)等）則無(wú)興趣。請(qǐng)你就這一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

要求：1. 表達(dá)連貫，邏輯正確 2. 字?jǐn)?shù)100-120 參考詞匯：情人節(jié)：Valentine’s Day

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Western holidays such as Christmas, Valentine’s Day, are getting more and more popular in China. Some Chinese people even get crazy on them. But at the same time, people seem to have less enthusiasm for our traditional festivals such as the Spring Festival and the Mooncake Festival.

In my opinion, the celebration of western holiday is a good way of learning the western cultures, which helps to promote understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures. Besides, the celebration can also make our life more interesting. However, we should make great efforts to preserve and enrich our own traditional culture.

【解析】這是一篇針對(duì)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的寫(xiě)作。主要表達(dá)你的立場(chǎng)，是該無(wú)視傳統(tǒng)文化追捧西方文化，還是應(yīng)該對(duì)自己的文化加以傳承，對(duì)外來(lái)文化取其精華棄其糟粕。關(guān)鍵是邏輯性，觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度明確。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。第一段第一句are getting more and more popular，用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)表明西方文化在現(xiàn)在變得流行的勢(shì)頭。第三句But at the same time,插入語(yǔ)增加文章的亮點(diǎn)，與前一句很好地銜接增加句子連貫性。第一段最后一句such as舉例論證，使觀點(diǎn)更加鮮明。第二段開(kāi)頭用插入語(yǔ)In my opinion很好的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和立場(chǎng)，第二段第二句which helps to promote understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures.是which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，句型有特點(diǎn)。用插入語(yǔ)Besides很好的使所表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)更豐富。最后一句However轉(zhuǎn)折連詞表達(dá)了表明了作者最后立場(chǎng)和觀點(diǎn)。短語(yǔ)make great efforts不遺余力，用的很好，表現(xiàn)了我們要保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化的決心。