Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.

However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gasses and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.

As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.

Answer 1

【答案】1. condition→conditions

2. convenient前加a

3. 去掉more

4. made→makes

5. up→off

6. much→many

7. lack→lacking

8. careful→carefully

9. As→Even

10. it→them

【解析】1. 句意：隨著人們生活條件的發(fā)展。生活條件通常用復(fù)數(shù)，故把condition改為conditions。

2. 句意：它是一種方便的、快捷的和舒適的交通方式。means表示“方式”，是可數(shù)名詞，這里表示“一種方式”，故要在convenient前加a。

3. 表示“更強(qiáng)壯”，比較級(jí)為stronger，more為多余，故去掉。

4. 根據(jù)全文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)為it，故把made改為makes。

5. give up是“放棄”的意思，這里表示汽車放出尾氣，故把up改為off。

6. 修飾可數(shù)名詞用many，不用much，故把much改為many。

7. lack parking lots“缺乏停車位”在這里作主語(yǔ)，故要把lack改為lacking。

8. 此處修飾think，應(yīng)該用副詞。

9. 前一句說(shuō)要我們?cè)谫I車之前仔細(xì)考慮，所以用as if （好像）不符合邏輯，用even if（盡管，即使）符合。

10. 此處代指從句中的cars，要用them而不是it。