【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Tom is music lover. He knows beats (音樂節(jié)拍) quite good. Now, the teenager is used his talent to become a DJ—a person which mixes different music during shows. He often gives shows around his hometown. At shows, Tom had to deal with difficult people. Once, a couple invited him to be the DJ at our party. The husband wanted country music, so his wife asked for pop music. To make them all happy, Tom played music in both styles. After playing at different parties and shows, Tom has become more confident and better at meet people’s needs. Moreover, he has made of enough money to buy set of DJ equipment so he can practice at home.

【答案】第一處： music前加a

第二處： good→well

第三處：used→using

第四處： which→that/who

第五處： had→has

第六處： our→their

第七處： so→but/while

第八處： all→both

第九處： meet→meeting

第十處：去掉of

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，講述了音樂愛好者湯姆利用他的天賦成為一名DJ，為別人演奏音樂的故事。

第一處：考查冠詞。句意：湯姆是個(gè)音樂愛好者。lover是可數(shù)名詞，此處用不定冠詞表泛指，music的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故在music前加a。

第二處：考查副詞。句意：他很熟悉音樂節(jié)拍。修飾動(dòng)詞knows用副詞，故good改為well。

第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)。句意：現(xiàn)在，這個(gè)年輕人正在利用他的天賦成為一名DJ，在演出中將不同的音樂混合在一起。the teenager 與use之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，is表明用的是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，此處用現(xiàn)在分詞，故used改為using。

第四處：考查定語從句。句意同上，此處為定語從句，關(guān)系詞指代先行詞a person并在從句中作主語，故which改為that/who。

第五處：考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。句意：在演出中，湯姆不得不與很難相處的人打交道。陳述的是客觀情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語是Tom，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，故had改為has。

第六處：考查代詞。句意：有一次，一對夫婦邀請他在他們的聚會(huì)上做DJ。此處指代“一對夫婦的”，表示“他們的”而不是“我們的”，故our改為their。

第七處：考查連詞。句意：丈夫想讓他演奏鄉(xiāng)村音樂，但（而）妻子想讓他演奏流行音樂。根據(jù)句意可知前后是轉(zhuǎn)折而非因果關(guān)系，也可用while表示對比，故so改為but/while。

第八處：考查代詞。句意：為了讓他們倆都高興，湯姆演奏了兩種風(fēng)格的音樂。all指“三者及三者以上都”，both指“兩者都”，此處指的是“夫婦二人都”，故all改為both。

第九處：考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：在參加了不同的聚會(huì)和演出后，湯姆變得更加自信，更善于滿足人們的需要。作介詞at的賓語用動(dòng)名詞，故meet改為meeting。

第十處：考查介詞。句意：而且，他賺了足夠的錢買了一套DJ設(shè)備，這樣他就可以在家練習(xí)了。made是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接接賓語，介詞of是多余的，故去掉of。

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