Question

最近，李越被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據她的事跡(在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝)，用英語為班級板報寫一篇l00一120個詞的短文。你的文章應包括下列要點：
1．李越的事跡及其對同學的影響；        2．你的評論。
注意：1．文章的標題和開頭已給出(不計詞數)。
2．參考詞匯： singing contest 歌詠比賽
Costume  服裝
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class.________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.

試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文，是關于每周之星的事跡的。主要的要點已經給出了，1．李越的事跡及其對同學的影響； 2．你的評論。但細節(jié)方面需要考生做適當的補充。在寫作的時候，要注意使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更有條理更流暢。同時也要使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型，讓文章更有檔次，更有層次。
點評：半開放性作文的難度較大，要求考生自己根據文章內容梳理要點，然后在整理成文，在寫作時要合理運用連接詞和高級詞匯高級句型，讓文章更有層次。