Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
根據(jù)下面提示與要求，請(qǐng)以 “Animal In Danger” 為題， 寫(xiě)一篇100—120 詞的英文短文。 簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明原因，并就動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施提出建議。
1．污染使許多動(dòng)物生存的環(huán)境遭到破壞。
2．亂砍亂伐使許多動(dòng)物失去家園。
3．許多動(dòng)物被過(guò)度捕殺而瀕臨滅絕。
4．針對(duì)以上的原因提出動(dòng)物保護(hù)措施。

Answer 1

As we know, a lot of animals are in danger now. Air and water are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live are destroyed. Besides, many trees are being cut down, making many animals lose their homes. What’s worse, many animals are over hunted for money and are being killed without mercy so that some of them are in danger of dying out.
In my opinion, something must be done now. Firstly, natural reserves should be set up to protect the animals. Secondly, all the illegal hunting should be punished. Thirdly, people should be made aware of the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way can we save the animals. To save the animals is to save ourselves.

試題分析：對(duì)于本文的寫(xiě)作，可以分兩段進(jìn)行。首先對(duì)動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕的原因，即污染是生存環(huán)境遭到破壞、亂砍亂伐現(xiàn)象、過(guò)度捕殺進(jìn)行闡述，分三層意思進(jìn)行平行或是遞進(jìn)式的表達(dá)，以顯出文章的層次感。第二段提出動(dòng)物保護(hù)的措施，對(duì)于此部分的寫(xiě)作同樣要注意條理清晰，句式富于變化。最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，說(shuō)出保護(hù)動(dòng)物的重大意義。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)面表達(dá)是最能體現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力和英語(yǔ)思維理解的題目，議論文的寫(xiě)作一般采用經(jīng)典的二段或三段式進(jìn)行行文，議論文是比較容易寫(xiě)的文體。對(duì)于表達(dá)內(nèi)容層次時(shí)需要使用平時(shí)積累的層次關(guān)系的短語(yǔ)，多使用被動(dòng)，倒裝、虛擬來(lái)提升作文的美度。在平時(shí)寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。