Question

請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

Answer 1

In the picture, we can see a giraffe making great efforts to reach for the leaves from a tall tree, sweating a lot. No matter how hard it tries, it still cannot get any leaf. Around the giraffe, there are some small trees which are much easier for it to approach.
The picture sends us the message that we should analyze the situation before taking action. Apparently, the short-sighted giraffe concentrates all its attention on the tall tree, neglecting other short trees around it, which can be reached easily. In reality, sometimes we may face the similar situation. Although we tried hard to achieve our goal, we may end up gaining nothing finally. What we should do is when we fail after making attempts, we need to analyze the situation around and consider other ways to solve the problem. Otherwise, we will find ourselves in a blind alley(死胡同)just like the giraffe in the picture.

解析試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了我們在行動前要分析形勢的問題，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】No matter how hard it tries, it still cannot get any leaf. 這句話用的是讓步狀語從句，Around the giraffe, there are some small trees which are much easier for it to approach. 這句話用的是定語從句， The picture sends us the message that we should analyze the situation before taking action. 這句話用的是同位語從句，Apparently, the short-sighted giraffe concentrates all its attention on the tall tree, neglecting other short trees around it, which can be reached easily. 這句話有定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， What we should do is when we fail after making attempts, we need to analyze the situation around and consider other ways to solve the problem. 這句話用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句。
考點：考查開放式作文