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6．假定你是李華，看到班上有部分同學(xué)在完成作業(yè)時(shí)，不自己獨(dú)立完成而是抄襲他人的作業(yè)，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你以My opinion on copying others'homework為題談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ǎ?br />

主要原因	作業(yè)量大，偏難
	對(duì)功課不感興趣，懶惰
	完成任務(wù)，取悅老師
危害及解決辦法	抄襲不對(duì)，違反校規(guī)
	要誠(chéng)實(shí)，勤奮學(xué)習(xí)
	有困難可請(qǐng)教同學(xué)和老師
個(gè)人看法	------

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
3．詞數(shù)：150字左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，首先要注意文章分段，這篇文章應(yīng)該分三段，第一段是學(xué)生抄作業(yè)的主要原因，第二段寫這種現(xiàn)象的危害及解決辦法，第三段寫自己的觀點(diǎn)，陳述要點(diǎn)要全面，不能遺漏，對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)要有理有據(jù)，寫出令人信服的理由來(lái)，在寫作時(shí)，要有意識(shí)的用一些復(fù)雜句．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：如：It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．這是that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型）這是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．另外在寫作時(shí)，也要注意考慮關(guān)聯(lián)的問(wèn)題：如：On one hand，On the other hand，In a word，F(xiàn)or another，As far as I'm concerned，都可以借鑒．
It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，lazy and uninterested in their lessons，some students copy others'homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers．（高分句型二）
For another，copying others'homework too often，we will lose the ability that can help us to think．（高分句型三）

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
       It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．On one hand，we students have to do a large amount of homework both at home and at school．It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out．（高分句型一）On the other hand，lazy and uninterested in their lessons，some students copy others'homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers．（高分句型二）
       In a word，copying others'homework is a bad habit．For one thing，it's against the rules of the school．We should be honest and work hard to achieve high grades．If we have difficulties，we can turn to our teachers and our classmates for help．For another，copying others'homework too often，we will lose the ability that can help us to think．（高分句型三）
       As far as I'm concerned，it's for our own sake to study．We should do our best to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．