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3．Gaby Lucy is just a 17-year-old American girl，but she has experienced life in the Dominican Republic as a volunteer．When she recalls her time volunteering there，she doesn't think about the fact that she had no running water and lived in a small house outside．Instead，she remembers fondly the people she met，the work she did with a youth group to improve accessibility to a local library and the leadership skills she gained．
American teens are setting an example to their parents through their volunteer work，according to a new survey by Harris Interactive．The random national telephone survey released this week found that more teens volunteer to support a charitable cause（慈善事業(yè)）-56 percent-than have a part-time job-39 percent．Parents said 82 percent of the teens in their lives do something to support charitable causes，including volunteering，inviting others to a cause or donating money．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點；
2．以約120個詞就"青少年從事志愿者工作"這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點：
（1）青少年從事志愿者工作的意義；
（2）簡述一次你自己或你身邊的人從事志愿者工作的經(jīng)歷和感受；
（3）請你向同齡中學(xué)生發(fā)出號召．
【寫作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
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Answer 1

分析 （高級句型一）For，one thing，not only can they acquire far more social experience，but also they can update their skills to deal with different situations in the near future．
該句型使用了not only…but also句型，強調(diào)了志愿者工作帶來的意義；
（高級句型二）What impressed me most was that the old folks were so happy to see us that they chatted a lot with us．
該句型使用了名詞性從句，What impressed me most 是句子的主語，that引導(dǎo)一個表語從句；
高級詞匯：set an example to 樹立榜樣；is of vital importance 至關(guān)重要的；take pride in．對，自豪；
For，one thing，F(xiàn)or another一方面，另一方面；In conclusion總結(jié)；

解答 The passage shows a delightful tendency that more teens are volunteering for charitable causes．Such actions set an example to their parents．Gaby Lucy from America is an example．（概括要點）
     （從事志愿者的意義）From my point of view，volunteering for charitable causes is of vital importance to teenagers．（高級句型一）For，one thing，not only can they acquire far more social experience，but also they can update their skills to deal with different situations in the near future．For another，it helps people in need in the quickest and most direct way，building up a bridge of love among people．
     （自己的經(jīng)歷和感受）I also once worked as a volunteer in old folks'home，which I'll always take pride in．I，together with my group members，helped clean their rooms，washed their clothes and presented a show for them．（高級句型二）What impressed me most was that the old folks were so happy to see us that they chatted a lot with us．
     （發(fā)出號召）In conclusion，volunteer work costs us nothing but helps us gain a lot．Therefore，I hope more teenagers can join us and do what we can to make the world more harmonious．

點評 本文屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫作，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容．認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．