Question

How to survive embarrassing moments? Have you ever accidently called your teacher Mum, or dropped your plate in your canteen(食堂) while everyone was looking at you? At that moment, you probably wished you could disappear into thin air. Unfortunately, embarrassing things happen to everyone at one time or another.

每個人都會經(jīng)歷尷尬時刻。請記敘一件你經(jīng)歷的尷尬事件。

要求：1. 要舉事例。

2. 不少于120字。

3. 友情提示：

文章的開頭要總說引起下文，接著舉例，最后要寫自己尷尬時刻的心理活動和感受。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

We cannot deny the fact that something embarrassing has ever happens to us everyone . Just as the saying goes , nobody can avoid making mistakes , thus nobody experiencing embarrassing moments .

When it comes to the topic , what impressed me most is that I didn’t realize she is a stranger until i turned back to say “ good bye”. That day , my friend, Jane , saw me off on the train station . I was so absorbed in telling something interesting to her that I didn’t even know when we were departed. It was in that moment that I realized I was talking with the wrong person . I felt so embarrassed that I wanted to run to the platform to escape from the scene , but I know I shouldn’t do like that. As a result ,I do nothing but make apologies . To my surprise , the woman gave me a warm smile and said she was happy when listening to my talking . From then on , I learn from her ,giving them a favor rather than laughing when they are embarrassed.

It is kind of the woman . Although she is a stranger ,she helps me out when finding I was in embarrassment . At the same time , she taught me a lesson that we can’t avoid embarrassing moments ,but we can help them out of embarrassment with giving kind words to response.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)中文和英文提示并結(jié)合自身生活實例寫一篇短文。英文提示語意思是“怎么樣度過尷尬的時刻？你是否曾經(jīng)偶然將你的老師錯誤地喊成‘媽媽’，或者在食堂里眾目睽睽之下你不小心將盤子掉地上了？在那一刻，你是不是想找個洞鉆進去，消失在他們面前。不幸的是，尷尬的事總是會時不時發(fā)生在每個人身上”記敘你的一件尷尬的事件，要舉事例，字數(shù)不得少于120字，同時要求文章開頭要總說引起下文，接著舉例，最后寫自己的心理活動和感受。不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文中對于“尷尬”這一詞的表達用了多種形式的表達，“something embarrassing has ever happens to us everyone ，”“I felt so embarrassed，”“I was in embarrassment，”多種形式表達同一種意思，避免重復，可以使文章變化多樣，避免單調(diào)乏味；

范文中使用了較多的語法知識，非限定性定語從句as the saying goes，同位語從句the fact that something embarrassing has……a lesson that we can’t avoid…….,省略句thus nobody experiencing embarrassing moments，when finding I was , 主語，表語，賓語從句what impressed me most is that I didn’t realize she is a stranger until i turned back to say “ good bye”，時間狀語從句when they are embarrassed.,強調(diào)句It was in that moment that I realized I was talking with the wrong person .非謂語giving kind words to response.結(jié)果狀語從句I felt so embarrassed that I wanted ，I was so absorbed in telling something interesting to her that I didn’t ，固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)，when it comes to…, we cannot deny the fact that, not… until…等。 非限定性定語從句，同位語從句，,強調(diào)句，主語，表語，賓語從句等語法的使用提升了文章的檔次，同時也顯示較高的語法知識點使用能力；

范文中注意使用了thus， That day，F(xiàn)rom then on，As a result， Although， At the same time , 增加了文章的連貫性，使文章上下聯(lián)系緊密；

范文中使用了一些固定短語: make mistakes, saw sb off ,be absorbed in doing ,escape from , To my surprise , give sb a favor, help sb out等豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實完整。

考點:材料類作文