Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)好友Jack在給你的郵件中提到他在選修中國(guó)國(guó)畫(huà)，打算在展示課上介紹下面三幅國(guó)畫(huà)中的一幅，希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）推薦一幅作品；

（2）介紹該作品內(nèi)容；

（3）給出推薦理由。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于50；（2）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：work（作品），dragonfly（蜻蜓），bamboo（竹子）

——Bai Xueshi

——Qi Baishi

——Xu Beihong

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you are going to introduce a Chinese painting in class and I’m writing to help you.

I suggest that you should introduce the one painted by Xu Beihong. Across the painting, we can see several horses running at high speed like missiles across the sky. To emphasize the horses even more, Xu cleverly drew in black ink to show the moving hair on the horse’s mane and tail. The reason why I recommend it to you is that horse is a typical subject of Xu’s works, which represents energy and success in Chinese culture. It is also a favorite of many art lovers all over the world.

I hope my suggestion can help you. Let me know if you still need help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you are going to introduce a Chinese painting in class. As a Chinese folk art lover, I’d like to offer you a hand.

Of the three paintings, I strongly suggest you choose the one painted by Qi Baishi, one of China’s greatest painters. Across the painting, you can see a tiny dragonfly flying towards the bamboo. With its eyes fixed on the bamboo, the tiny insect shows a great interest in the plant.

The reasons why I recommend it to you are as follows. First of all, dragonfly and bamboo are typical of Qi’s works, which, despite its simplicity, shows the harmony of nature. To emphasize the elegance and uprightness of the bamboo, Qi cleverly drew in strong and clear lines with bright color in a creative way. The dragonfly, with its wings spread above the bamboo, is also vividly painted. Another important reason for choosing this painting is that, in Chinese culture, bamboo is a symbol of good virtues and success.

I hope my suggestion can help you. Look forward to your great performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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題目要求假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)好友Jack在給你的郵件中提到他在選修中國(guó)國(guó)畫(huà)，打算在展示課上介紹下面三幅國(guó)畫(huà)中的一幅，希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）推薦一幅作品；（2）介紹該作品內(nèi)容；（3）給出推薦理由。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱(chēng)為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫(xiě)哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。