【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線．并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

LiMingisafriendofmine．I'mgladhechangedgreatlyinthepasttwoyears．Iclearlyrememberhewasquitefattwoyearsbefore．Hegottiredso easythathecouldn'ttakeexercise, thatmadehimveryupset．Later，herealized unlesshewentonlikethat，hewouldendupachievenothing．

So，hemade uphismindstomakeachange．Hewentrunningeverymorningandplayed thebasketballeveryafternoon．Besides ,hefollowedadietofmorevegetablesorlessmeat．Graduallyhebegantoloseweight．Heisnowanenergeticboy ingoodhealth．Sowhenfacedwithproblems，weshouldovercomeitwithgreat determinationandstrongwillpower．

【答案】1. 在changed前加has；2. before→ago；3. easy→easily；4. that→which；5. unless→if；6. achieve→achieving；7. minds→mind；8. 把basketball前的the去掉；9. or→and；10. it→them

【解析】1.根據(jù)in the past two years可知，句子用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，故在changed前加has。

2.句意：我記得兩年前他很胖。句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，表示兩年前用two years ago，故把before改為ago。

3.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把easy改為easily。

4.整個(gè)句子作先行詞，后面是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，指代整個(gè)句子用which；故that改為which。

5.句意：后來(lái)，他意識(shí)到如果繼續(xù)像那樣。此處是if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，表“如果”，故unless改為if。

6.固定搭配：end up doing sth.以做某事而結(jié)束，故把a(bǔ)chieve改為achieving。

7.固定詞組：make up one’s mind下決心。故把minds改為mind。

8.固定結(jié)構(gòu)：play basketball打籃球。play和球類連用不用冠詞，故把play the basketball中的the去掉。

9.句意：更多的蔬菜和較少的的肉。故or改為and。

10.因?yàn)榍鞍刖涞?/span>problems是名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以后面用them替代，故it改為them。

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