Question

由于觀點(diǎn)和立場(chǎng)的不同,孩子與父母之間時(shí)常存在一些矛盾和問(wèn)題,某英文報(bào)社正在就“如何改善孩子與父母之間的關(guān)系”這一主題征稿,請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。 
要點(diǎn)如下:
1. 存在問(wèn)題:
孩子:不信任父母,不愿意與父母交流；經(jīng)常對(duì)父母發(fā)脾氣……
父母:處理問(wèn)題的方式簡(jiǎn)單,把自己的想法強(qiáng)加(impose . . . . . . on)給孩子……
2. 解決辦法:
孩子:多和父母溝通；尊敬父母,多體諒父母……
父母:多和孩子相處,耐心聽(tīng)取他們的想法…… 
注意:可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；詞數(shù):120左右

Answer 1

A good parent-child relationship is expected, but there are often problems.
As for children, they don’t trust their parents and are unwilling to communicate with them. Some children lose their temper easily because of the study burden, while some parents tend to neglect their children’s ideas and try to impose their own ideas on them.
How can these problems be solved? In my opinion, children should be considerate and respect their parents. When they disagree with their parents, they should tell them. On the other hand, parents should learn to listen to their children’s ideas instead of deciding everything for them. In this way, a good parent-child relationship can be established.

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