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5．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇英文簡(jiǎn)訊，投稿到�？�英文版．
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容

時(shí)間：2014年2月 人物：三名外籍大學(xué)畢業(yè)生 事件：應(yīng)聘到佛山政府就職 職責(zé)：給領(lǐng)導(dǎo)提供建議 搭建佛山與國(guó)外溝通的橋梁 感受：覺(jué)得大部分民眾對(duì)工作理解和支持 對(duì)工作時(shí)間不習(xí)慣 效果：引起了公眾關(guān)注 吸引了更多外國(guó)商人來(lái)佛山建廠 政府評(píng)價(jià)：他們的表現(xiàn)超過(guò)預(yù)期           將繼續(xù)引進(jìn)外國(guó)人才

寫(xiě)作要求
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
In February 2014，three university graduates from abroad were employed inFoshan government．They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build a bridge for communication between Foshan and foreign countries．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Foshan．As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一篇英文簡(jiǎn)訊．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．時(shí)間；2．人物；3．事件；4．職責(zé)；5．感受；6．效果；7．政府評(píng)價(jià)．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：be responsible for （對(duì)…負(fù)責(zé)），provide sth for sb （為…提供…），be accustomed to doing （習(xí)慣于…），draw public attention（吸引公眾的注意），set up（建立，搭建），as a result of （由于），beyond one's expectations （超出了某人的預(yù)期），bring in （引進(jìn)）．
【高分句型】
1．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．
這里是由though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，逗號(hào)之前是主句．They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work中是由that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作形容詞happy的賓語(yǔ)．
2．Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．這里是由and連接了draw和attract兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，動(dòng)詞不定式to set up factories in Fo Shan作目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 In February 2014，（時(shí)間） three university graduates from abroad were employed in Fo Shan government．（人物、事件）They are mainly responsible for providing advice for leaders and build abridge for communication between Fo shan and foreign countries．（職責(zé)） They are happy that most Chinese people understand and support their work，though they are not accustomed to the working hours．【高分句型】（感受）Their work has drawn public attention and attracted more foreign businessmen to set up factories in Fo shan．【高分句型】（效果） As a result of their good performance，the government officials comment that the foreign employers have gone beyond their expectations and they will continue to bring in more foreign talents．（政府評(píng)價(jià)）

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