Question

【題目】請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

Sharing is good for ourselves as well as others.

注意： ①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語;

②除詩歌外，文體不限;

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合自己生活中的具體事例；

④文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

⑤詞數(shù)不少于150字。

Answer 1

【答案】

Just as the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” Giving others what you have means more than being generous. As a matter of fact, it has a magic power which doubles your happiness and reduces your sadness by half.

I can well remember the first few months after I entered senior school, I felt it really hard to keep up with the teaching pace in pace, as a result of which I couldn’t take down notes. By coincidence, my friend had the same confusion. The problem kept bothering us until she suggested a wonderful solution. In the days that followed, we set aside some time in the afternoon to check notes, share what we had and make up the missing details. It turned out to be a wise decision because both of us could listen to the teacher with full attention without worrying about missing any points.

From my own experience, I learned the importance of sharing: since we are not living in an isolated island, sharing becomes extremely important especially when we meet with difficulties in life. So please don’t hesitate to share your joy and pain with others , and you are sure to gain.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于開放性作文，題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，結(jié)合生活事例寫一篇短文。注意不得照抄提示語。使用第一人稱進行寫作，注意不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點錯誤。選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，選擇句式時要賦予變化。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。亮點說明：本文運用了一些比較好的短語，例如：As a matter of fact，pace in pace，By coincidence，turned out to be等，其句型也可謂是精彩紛呈，比如時間狀語從句的使用：The problem kept bothering us until she suggested a wonderful solution；定語從句的使用：it has a magic power which doubles your happiness and reduces your sadness by half；一些連詞的使用使得句子間通順流暢，如since, so ,and等;諺語的使用：Roses given, fragrance in hand。