Question

13．假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你市正在創(chuàng)建文明城市，請(qǐng)以"Changes I have seen"為題發(fā)表演講，呼吁大家為"創(chuàng)建文明城市"做貢獻(xiàn)．
要點(diǎn)：1．分享你看到的變化（如交通志愿者）；2．你的呼吁．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：文明城市civilized city
Good morning，everyone!
It's a great honor for meto talk about some changes I've witnessed in the process of creating a civilized city．What has impressed me most is the traffic．We often saw pedestrians jump the red light．But now many volunteers stand at the crossroads，reminding the pedestrians to obey the traffic regulations．Of course，as educated citizens，we can do more to help our city to be more civilized，such as arousing the public's traffic awareness and helping more people to become more self-disciplined．
Just as the saying goes，"Individuals together can make a difference．"I believe our city will become more civilized and harmonious through our joint efforts．So I'm here to appeal to everyone to do your bit for our city．Only in this way will our city take on a new look and become a better place to live in．
Thank you for listening!
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本書(shū)面表達(dá)是要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)"Changes I have seen"為題的演講稿，是一篇典型的提綱作文，在寫(xiě)作之前要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如It's a great honor for me to…，Only in this way will…以及appeal to；還運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯self-disciplined，Individuals等等．并注意了句子的銜接如：So等等．
【高分句型】
 It's+形容詞+for+sb．+to do sth．對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的．（It's a great honor for me to talk about some changes，我很榮幸能談?wù)勔恍┳兓�．�?nbsp; 
Just as the saying goes，正如俗話說(shuō)．
Only in this way will…，只有這樣，才能…（Only in this way will our city take on a new look and become a better place to live in，只有這樣，我們的城市才會(huì)煥然一新，成為一個(gè)更好的居住環(huán)境．）

解答 Good morning，everyone!
        It's a great honor for me to talk about some changes I've witnessed in the process of creating a civilized city．What has impressed me most is the traffic．We often saw pedestrians jump the red light．But now many volunteers stand at the crossroads，reminding the pedestrians to obey the traffic regulations．Of course，as educated citizens，we can do more to help our city to be more civilized，such as arousing the public's traffic awareness and helping more people to become more self-disciplined．
       Just as the saying goes，"Individuals together can make a difference．"I believe our city will become more civilized and harmonious through our joint efforts．So I'm here to appeal to everyone to do your bit for our city．Only in this way will our city take on a new look and become a better place to live in．
      Thank you for listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．