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19．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（　�。�，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
A Frenchman is once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English．So after he left his hotel，he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying．Then he walked on．At last，he got lost．In several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel，however he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read："One-way street"．

Answer 1

分析 一位法國(guó)人去倫敦旅游，他想走著去看看這個(gè)城市，但他怕會(huì)迷路，因?yàn)樗�不懂英語，所以走出賓館他在第一個(gè)路口記下了他所在的地方．然后他繼續(xù)走，最后他真的迷路了，幾個(gè)小時(shí)后他找到了一個(gè)警察，這個(gè)法國(guó)人費(fèi)了很大勁向警察解釋他不知道賓館的名字，但他知道那條路的名字，然后他把在筆記本上記下的給警察看，結(jié)果上面寫著"單行道"．

解答 A Frenchman is once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English．So after he left his hotel，he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying．Then he walked on．At last，he got lost．In several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain∧the policeman that he didn't know the name of his hotel，however he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read："One-way street"．
1．去掉is并把visiting改為visited；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．全文講述一個(gè)法國(guó)人游覽倫敦的過去經(jīng)歷．因此文章的主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)．
2．a(chǎn)改為the；考查冠詞的用法．這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是指?jìng)惗剡@個(gè)城市，故要用定冠詞the表示特指．
3．去掉being；考查動(dòng)詞短語．get lost意為"迷路，走失"．
4．on改為at；考查介詞的用法．a(chǎn)t the corner意為"在角落"．
5．names改為name；考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)．記錄他停留的這條街道的名字．故name要用單數(shù)形式．
6．In改為After；考查介詞的用法．以過去時(shí)間為起點(diǎn)談"以后"，用介詞after．
7．explain后面加to；考查動(dòng)詞的用法．explain to somebody something意為"向某人解釋什么"．
8．however改為but/yet；考查連詞的用法．however用在句中，要用逗號(hào)隔開，屬于句子之間的轉(zhuǎn)折．句內(nèi)轉(zhuǎn)折多用but/yet，而且不用逗號(hào)隔開．
9．that改為what；考查賓語從句．分析句意為"他向警察展示自己筆記本里所記錄的街道名字"，從句缺少主語，故用what作賓語從句的主語．
10．去掉was；考查動(dòng)詞的語態(tài)．筆記本上寫道，用read表達(dá)，無被動(dòng)意思．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要先通讀全文，整體理解短文的基本大意，然后分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，運(yùn)用所掌握的基本語言知識(shí)從細(xì)節(jié)上加以分析，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤并加以改正．