Question

為了減少食物浪費(fèi) ，中國最近開展了“光盤行動”。假如你是某校的學(xué)生李華，請以“Against Food Waste”為問題，寫一篇120字左右短文，擬發(fā)表在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英文版上。內(nèi)容包括如下 ：
就餐浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象描述：據(jù)報道，每年全國在餐館被倒掉的食物估計(jì)可養(yǎng)活2億人
就餐浪費(fèi)的原因
提出你的倡議
注意：陳述要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
China has launched a national campaign “Eat up All on the Plates”___________________________________
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Answer 1

China has launched a national campaign “Eat up All on the Plates”. For the leftovers in restaurants across the country are almost enough to feed 200 million people annually, according to reports.
It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their quests with more than enough food, believing that they have not satisfied their guests if there’s no food left on the table, which they think is a good way to show their hospitality. They think they will be looked down upon if they don’t do that.
The “Eat up All on the Plates” campaign is intended to reduce the waste and raise people’s awareness. As middle school students, we should do our bit to say “No” to food waste, and try to develop the habit of never ordering or cooking more than what we need so as to save our limited food resources, on which we depend for a better life.

解析試題分析：題目要求以“Against Food Waste”為題寫一篇120字左右的短文，發(fā)表在校網(wǎng)站英文版上。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，可以分三段來寫，第一段描述浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；第二段敘述就餐浪費(fèi)的原因；第三段給出自己的建議。寫作時，使用第一人稱，注意時態(tài)和語法的正確使用，不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯誤。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了一些重點(diǎn)語法知識：固定句型It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their quests；非謂語動詞believing that they have not satisfied their guests；條件狀語從句if there’s no food left on the table，if they don’t do that；定語從句which they think is a good way to show their hospitality，on which we depend for a better life；賓語從句they will be looked down upon，what we need，語法知識運(yùn)用熟練，給作文增色不少；
范文使用了一些短語：according to；do our bit；try to；so as to等，使作文比較充實(shí)有說服力；
范文也使用了一些固定搭配：is intended to；with more than enough food；As middle school students等，使作文行文比較流暢。
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