Question

假定你是西安某一中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。在一個英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上,你看到如下的一個帖子:

??? With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

請你回帖，要點如下： 

1. 同意并表示擔(dān)憂，實際上，學(xué)生心理壓力不可避免。

2. 列出某些學(xué)生心理焦慮的現(xiàn)象（如：擔(dān)心考不好；缺乏自信心；容易發(fā)脾氣等）；

3. 提出應(yīng)該采取的對策（如積極態(tài)度和應(yīng)對方法）。

注意：1. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

    ? 2. 詞數(shù)：不少于100字。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I can’t agree more with what you said. That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.

Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，先讀懂這篇帖子，弄清帖子的內(nèi)容是關(guān)于高三學(xué)生的考前壓力的問題，再根據(jù)給出來的要點來闡述，題目有三個要點，但是不是很具體，考生要根據(jù)要點進行拓展發(fā)揮，不能有遺漏，內(nèi)容一定要充實，這就要求增加了難度。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組和好的句子：tend to容易，往往會，because of因為， get along well with 和…相處好，As a matter of fact事實上, turn to 求助于，of vital importance至關(guān)重要的. I can’t agree more with what you said.這句話用了賓語從句，That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. 這句話用了主語從句，It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.這句話用給了主語從句和非限制性定語從句， Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night.這句話用了狀語從句， With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。還有范文中使用了First of all, Second, Last but not least,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點：考查提綱類書面表達