Question

7．假如你是高中生李華，從美國(guó)來(lái)的交流生Peter將寄住在你家，他將于近日乘飛機(jī)抵達(dá)你所在的城市，請(qǐng)你寫信給Peter了解下列事宜．
1．飛機(jī)航班號(hào)以及到達(dá)的具體時(shí)間；2．在中國(guó)停留的時(shí)間；3．飲食和居住有無(wú)特殊的要求；4．如果情況有變請(qǐng)及時(shí)告知．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）開頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China and studying with us for some time．------
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是高中生李華，從美國(guó)來(lái)的交流生Peter將寄住在你家，他將于近日乘飛機(jī)抵達(dá)你所在的城市，請(qǐng)你寫信給Peter了解下列事宜，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：飛機(jī)航班號(hào)以及到達(dá)的具體時(shí)間；在中國(guó)停留的時(shí)間；飲食和居住有無(wú)特殊的要求；如果情況有變請(qǐng)及時(shí)告知． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in order to以便，為了；make sure確保；have a good time過(guò)的愉快；pick up接，搭載；besides另外；as soon as possible盡可能的快In order to make sure you have a good time here，I'd like to know the following things．（高分句型一）
Since I will pick you up at the airport，it's very important that you let me know your flight number and the time of your arrival in advance．（高分句型二）Once there are any changes of your plan，please inform me as soon as possible．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China and studying with us for some time．In order to make sure you have a good time here，I'd like to know the following things．（高分句型一）
      Since I will pick you up at the airport，it's very important that you let me know your flight number and the time of your arrival in advance．（高分句型二）Besides，I am wondering how long you are going to stay in China．And when living at my home，do you have any special requirements for your accommodation and what you eat？Once there are any changes of your plan，please inform me as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
       I can't wait to see you and I am looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．