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【題目】As a natural emotion that everyone experiences in life，anger is in many cases a perfectly healthy emotion.Anger can motivate(激發(fā)) people to make very positive changes in their lives.Sometimes we have to be angry at injustice(不公正)，or even at nature，before we can do what needs to be done to correct wrongs or make things better.But of course，that is not what we usually think of anger.

Most people think of anger as an emotion we must keep under control.Parents tell a child to “get control” of himself when the child shows anger.Children are sometimes sent to their rooms or punished for expressing anger in an extreme way.We may be angry with friends or at work，but we know it is usually not suitable to show it.We have to control the anger or suffer what may be the negative consequences.Very early in life，we learn that anger is something that must be controlled.We learn this for a good reason.We know that uncontrolled anger can lead to fights，car accidents，bad relationships with others，unacceptable social behavior，and many other problems.

Many experts say that if one holds his anger in，it can even lead to severe mental and physical health problems.So what can we do to understand and calm this natural emotion that we call anger?

Experts offer many solutions to harmful anger.Some of these solutions include expressing your feelings and talking about what has caused the anger with someone you trust，avoiding a situation that causes anger，beating a pillow，exercising more and many other methods.Whatever solution one chooses，it is good to know that by trying to find the solution to the problem of anger，the first step in the right direction to solving the anger problem has been taken.

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【答案】Anger，as a natural emotion，is good for us.It can inspire us to make positive changes in our lives.And most people agree that we must keep anger under control.However，experts think holding back anger is harmful to our health.Therefore，some solutions should be taken to deal with anger.For example，we can talk with friends，beat a pillow or take some exercise.

【解析】1.審題，明確題目要求。 通過(guò)審題明確文章主題、寫作內(nèi)容、主要時(shí)態(tài)和主體人稱等問(wèn)題。其中主體人稱，就是要確定以第幾人稱進(jìn)行寫作。 2.閱讀，抓住內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 閱讀短文，找出文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 (1)議論文：找出論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和結(jié)論。其關(guān)鍵是找出主題句或結(jié)論句。若文中有一分為二的觀點(diǎn)的，兩種觀點(diǎn)都要概括，不要漏掉其中一方的觀點(diǎn)。 (2)記敘文：找出時(shí)間(when),地點(diǎn)(where),什么人(who)，做了什么事(what),結(jié)果怎么樣(how)等五要素。其中,最重要的要點(diǎn)是某人(who)做了何事(what)。若是夾敘夾議的文章,還要加上作者的看法、觀點(diǎn)、經(jīng)驗(yàn)或感悟。 (3)說(shuō)明文和新聞報(bào)道：通常會(huì)有中心句(多在首段)，寫概要時(shí)注意要找出中心句，抓住關(guān)鍵詞。對(duì)現(xiàn)象分析型說(shuō)明文，要找出“現(xiàn)象”“造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因”“解決這種現(xiàn)象或問(wèn)題的措施或建議”。 (4)發(fā)言稿：通常會(huì)很明確地表明觀點(diǎn)或態(tài)度，寫概要時(shí)要從發(fā)言者的言語(yǔ)中明確作者的態(tài)度，把握作者的寫作目的�；蛳雀爬�每段大意，進(jìn)而歸納全文主旨。 3.概括，轉(zhuǎn)述作者觀點(diǎn)。 在找出文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)后，就要用自己的話轉(zhuǎn)述原文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。要注意在用詞或句式上做到同義替換，避免抄襲之嫌。 4.過(guò)渡，引出自己觀點(diǎn)。 摘要完成后，通過(guò)過(guò)渡語(yǔ)的銜接，引出自己的觀點(diǎn)(贊成或反對(duì))或引出類似的故事。 5.例證，論證自己觀點(diǎn)。 議論文——在提出自己的觀點(diǎn)后，就用具體的事例來(lái)論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。 記敘文——編寫與閱讀文章主題相同但情節(jié)不同的故事(親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu))。 6.結(jié)論，注意前后呼應(yīng)。 7.潤(rùn)色，使其錦上添花。 一查人稱是否符合要求；二查語(yǔ)法方面的問(wèn)題，包括用詞、時(shí)態(tài)等方面的錯(cuò)誤等，確�！罢Z(yǔ)言規(guī)范”；三查邏輯關(guān)系，看前后觀點(diǎn)是否一致；四查是否使用一些較為高級(jí)的句型，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)、with 短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)、定語(yǔ)從句、倒裝句型、恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞、短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等。