Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你校正在舉辦英語周活動(dòng)，你準(zhǔn)備參加以Sharing為主題的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你結(jié)一個(gè)事例，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)凷haring的作用。演講稿應(yīng)包含下列要點(diǎn)：

1. 有關(guān)Sharing的一個(gè)事例：時(shí)間，人物，內(nèi)容，過程，影響等；

2. 你的感悟。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右.

2. 演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone!

It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everybody!

It's a great honour to be here and share something with you. I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me to go to the playground. “You're always the best in my heart，” she comforted me. “There is always a road ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before. I felt much better.

Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a Swedish proverb goes, “Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” Sharing can broaden our horizons. As for me, by doing this, I live a happier and more confident life.

Thanks for your attention!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇以Sharing為主題的英語演講比賽，首先要用正確的格式去寫，會(huì)用一些短語，了解英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語的不同，需要平時(shí)對(duì)課本上的課文要正確地理解，會(huì)仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語句子，這里是有關(guān)Sharing的一個(gè)事例：時(shí)間，人物，內(nèi)容，過程，影響等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用第一人稱來敘述。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：It's a great honour todo sth.、share something with、come up、live a happier and more confident life等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過渡詞如：at that time、strangely等，使文章更加連貫完整。全文主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)做到使用準(zhǔn)確。