Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你接受了一項寫作任務(wù)，要為英語校報寫一篇人物介紹。請你根據(jù)以下信息，向編輯介紹一位偉大的人物。

姓名:Mark Twain

出生日期：1835年11月30日

職業(yè)：作家

生平：出生于美國鄉(xiāng)村。11歲時父親去世。年輕時做過工人、記者等。一生中出版過許多小說。1910年4月21日因病逝世。

性格特征：聰明，幽默。

參考詞匯：出版publish幽默的humorous

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor.

I’d like to introduce a great man to you.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’d like to introduce a great man to you.

Mark Twain, an American man, was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30, 1835. He is known to the world as a great writer. Unluckily, his father died when he was 11 years old. However, he was always positive toward life. As a young man, he did different jobs, such as a worker and a reporter. He was fond of writing all the time. As a result, many novels were published in his life. He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21, 1910.

Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇郵件，文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出，同學(xué)們在寫郵件的過程中應(yīng)該注意幾點：

1.郵件的格式正確性，信件開頭和結(jié)尾格式較為固定，但根據(jù)題干要求，寫信對象的不同可稍作調(diào)整。例如本題中，收件人為編輯，落款為李華。

2.寫郵件一般開門見山，交代寫郵件的原因，便于讀信人了解郵件重點。在本篇文章中，首先就交代了寫信的原因“I’d like to introduce a great man to you.”

3.注意文章要以一定的邏輯順序進(jìn)行敘述，既滿足題目要求又能把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚。范文從馬克吐溫的背景開始介紹，并介紹了他的一些杰出的成就，內(nèi)容連貫通暢。

【范文亮點】

優(yōu)秀詞匯和短語：be known to the world 被世界所知，Unluckily不幸的是，be positive toward life積極應(yīng)對生活，such as例如，be fond of熱愛，As a result所以。

優(yōu)秀句式和行文脈絡(luò)：

1. He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21, 1910.這句使用了一個固定搭配“devote to奉獻(xiàn)于”，體現(xiàn)了馬克吐溫的偉大貢獻(xiàn)。

2.全文運用了Unluckily，However，As a result這些連接詞使行文流暢。而且全文邏輯清晰，觀點鮮明，最后還寫出對馬克吐溫概括性的評價“Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever.”，這些細(xì)節(jié)處理的很好。