Question

19．假設你是李華，你和好朋友Lily約好上周六一起去書店（bookstore）．但是，你因故沒能赴約，請根據(jù)以下要點給她發(fā)一封email．
內容包括：1．真誠道歉；  2．說明原因； 3．彌補措施．
注意：
1．時態(tài)的運用    2．詞數(shù)100左右
3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）   4．請在答題卡上作答．
Dear Lily，
I am very sorry that                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 題目要求寫一封郵件，就不能如約一起去書向Bob道歉，使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時進行寫作．寫作內容包括：表示歉意；說明原因；彌補措施，另約時間．注意使用連接詞，使作文內容連貫．
亮點說明：范文包括了所有要點內容，做到了語意連貫．范文使用了賓語從句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的狀語從句so that we'll have more time to read and select books；條件句If it's convenient for you；省略句If not等，長短句結合，使內容更加豐富．

解答 Dear Lily，
      I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon．I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon．（高分句型一）I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble．
     Shall we go on Saturday morning？We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books．If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate．（高分句型二）If not，let me know what time suits you best．I should be available any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．