Question

【題目】假如你是李華，有一天周末和幾個同學一起去爬山，看到有人在山上用網捉鳥。有必要向WWF反映這一情況。請寫封郵件，內容包括：

1.山上看到的情況； 2.保護鳥類的原因； 3.保護措施。

注意：1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．郵件開頭和結尾已經為寫好，不算作總詞數。

Dear WWF,

I am Li Hua, one of a middle school students. I am writing to _______________________________________

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear WWF,

I’m Li Hua, one of a high school students. I am writing to inform you of the situation where the birds are living. Some people are catching the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area. What’s worse, a few people even put birds on tables for dinner

It is known that animals and birds are human beings’ friends. We are to live harmoniously with them. For one thing, they can catch pests of the plants for farmers. For another, without birds our forests would not be lively and our envorienment would miss a friendly member.

In order to protect birds from being caught or killed, we should widely spread the laws of animal protection .Besides, education and raising people’s awareness are effective measures.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇郵件類作文。本文要求考生以李華的名義給WWF世界自然基金會寫一封信，向WWF反映有人在山上用網捉鳥這一情況。考生在成文時應注意：合理發(fā)揮想象力，使文章的表達自然，豐滿。文章的寫作要點要齊全：（1）. 山上看到的情況…；（2）. 保護鳥類的原因…；（3）. 保護措施…。注意文章的人稱：以第一人稱為主。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。注意使用高級詞匯on the top of，harmoniously，spread，awareness,和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當使用一些連詞What’s worse、For one thing,、For another, Besides,插入語，使文章表達自然，流暢。注意次數：80—120之間。

【范文亮點】①I am writing to inform you of the situation where the birds are living..定語從句結構；②It is known that animals and birds are human beings’ friends.主語從句結構。